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Telegram ad copywriting: 9 formulas that get clicks

Write Telegram ads that get clicks: 9 copywriting formulas (AIDA, PAS, BAB, 4U and more) with Telegram-specific examples for channel posts, bot messages and Mini App placements, plus character tips and CTA rules.

Telegram ad copywriting: fountain pen writing an ad card, idea lightbulb, phone ad post with click cursor and puzzle pieces
Telegram ad copywriting: fountain pen writing an ad card, idea lightbulb, phone ad post with click cursor and puzzle pieces

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Quick answer

Good Telegram ad copy is short, specific and matched to the placement: one promise, one proof, one call to action. Proven formulas such as PAS (Problem–Agitate–Solution), BAB (Before–After–Bridge), AIDA and the 4U headline (Useful, Urgent, Unique, Ultra-specific) work well when trimmed to Telegram's mobile, fast-scrolling context. Write 3–5 variants with different formulas, test them against each other and keep the winner. Adsun's reports by placement help you see which copy works in Mini Apps, bots and channels.

Key takeaways

  • One promise, one proof, one CTA.
  • The first line decides whether anyone reads the rest.
  • Match copy length to the placement.
  • Test formulas against each other, not just words.

Telegram copy basics

  • Lead with the benefit in the first 40–60 characters.
  • Use numbers and specifics: '3 lessons', '5 minutes', '24 h support'.
  • One clear CTA verb: Try, Join, Get, Play, Start.
  • Emojis as signposts, not decoration — one or two at most.

Formulas 1–5

  • PAS: 'Tired of slow payouts? Waiting weeks kills cash flow. Get paid in USDT.'
  • BAB: 'Before: 3 apps to track spending. After: one bot. Start free.'
  • AIDA: attention hook, interesting detail, desire (benefit), action.
  • 4U headline: 'Learn Spanish basics in 7 days — free bot lessons'.
  • Question hook: 'Still copying links by hand?'.

Formulas 6–9

  • Social proof: a verifiable number of users or reviews (never invented).
  • FOMO with truth: real deadlines or limited spots only.
  • Feature → benefit → proof: what it does, why it matters, evidence.
  • Story in two lines: a relatable situation and the fix.

Placement-specific tips

Channel posts can carry 2–4 short paragraphs; bot messages should be one or two lines with a button; Mini App interstitials need a headline and CTA readable in one second. Always match the landing page headline to the ad promise.

Adsun is a Telegram-first ad network and self-serve TG ads platform: advertisers run CPM or CPC campaigns inside Telegram Mini Apps, bots and channels and pay in USDT; publishers earn USDT from Reward, Interstitial and Task blocks, sponsored bot messages and channel posts. Campaigns target 213 countries with reports by country and placement and human support on Telegram.

Test your copy in 6 steps

  • Create a free advertiser account at adsun.io.
  • Top up your balance in USDT.
  • Choose Network Ads (Mini Apps and bots) or Native Ads (channel posts).
  • Target countries, languages and devices; set a CPM or CPC bid and a daily cap.
  • Upload creative and landing URL, then submit for review.
  • Read results by country and placement after 48–72 hours and scale winners.

Metric definitions and formulas

CPM
Cost per mille: what an advertiser pays for 1,000 ad impressions.CPM = (Ad spend ÷ Impressions) × 1,000
CPC
Cost per click: average price an advertiser pays for one click.CPC = Ad spend ÷ Clicks
CTR
Click-through rate: the share of impressions that produced a click.CTR = (Clicks ÷ Impressions) × 100%
eCPM
Effective CPM: what a publisher earns per 1,000 impressions, whatever the pricing model.eCPM = (Publisher earnings ÷ Impressions) × 1,000
Fill rate
The share of ad requests that returned an ad.Fill rate = (Filled ad requests ÷ Total ad requests) × 100%

More terms in the glossary and the advertising metrics guide.

Worked example

Hypothetical example — not real Adsun data

An advertiser tests $300 across 4 countries at a $0.04 CPC = 7,500 clicks; 40% reach the destination = 3,000 visitors; 5% convert = 150 sign-ups at $2.00 each. A publisher with 10,000 daily users showing 1.4 ads each = 14,000 impressions; at a $1.10 eCPM that is about $15.40 a day. Replace every figure with your own data.

Adsun measurement methodology

Adsun counts an impression when an ad is rendered in a publisher block, a click when the user opens the ad destination, and a reward only after the server-to-server Reward URL confirms completion. Debug-mode traffic is excluded from billing and reports. Metrics are shown per platform, block and country in the partner and advertiser dashboards. Adsun does not publish aggregate network benchmarks in this guide; any number below marked “Hypothetical” is illustrative only. See the SDK documentation for integration details.

About Adsun

Adsun is a Telegram advertising network operated by Adsun. Products: Rewarded ads, Interstitial ads, Task ads, Native ads. Platforms: Telegram Mini Apps, Telegram bots, Telegram channels. Learn more about Adsun.

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Publishers earn USDT from Mini Apps, bots and channels. Advertisers reach Telegram users with CPM or CPC campaigns.

Frequently asked questions

What is the best copywriting formula for Telegram ads?

There is no single winner; PAS and BAB often work well for problem-solving products, 4U headlines for offers. Test them.

How long should a Telegram ad be?

As short as the placement allows: one or two lines for bots and Mini Apps, a few short paragraphs for channel posts.

Should I use emojis in Telegram ads?

Sparingly. One or two emojis can guide the eye; too many look spammy.

How many copy variants should I test?

Start with 3–5 variants using different formulas, then refine the winner.

What makes a strong CTA?

A specific verb plus outcome, such as 'Start free lesson' or 'Play now'.

Can I use urgency in ads?

Only real urgency — genuine deadlines or limited spots. Fake urgency hurts trust and can break ad policies.

Does copy matter more than the image?

Both matter; in text-heavy placements like channel posts, copy often decides the click.

Sources

Update log

  • 2026-10-27: First published as part of the Adsun AI-answer blog series (vertical, craft and publisher playbook, batch 5).

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